End in sight on second revision.
worked Saturday with my friend Hillary
it wasn't a paycheck or productive, but we
enjoyed each other's company.
gardened, wrote, hiked, wrote, cleaned, wrote,
wanted to paint the sun shades but it sprinkled
enough to make the cars a mess
they say El Nino is coming,
edited forty pages but can't decide on the ending
realize I keep using certain words
here are my sinner darlings:
specific to this novel the repeater / recycled are:
I'm using symbols and
images in the narrative to clarify
the voice that changes.
¥ § ҈ ‡ ∞
When I began this river, this rail
I thought the road was straight
I killed off a character who is sweet
let one get away with murder, again.
Does an ending have to be just?
It's 102322 words,
more then send off to Dave Malone
Then another process of slashing
Sorry no punctation in this one,
just a long rain run on of what
© 2014 caroline gerardo
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